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« Thread Started on Apr 8, 2006, 1:10pm »
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Okay, people, we need a plot.
Like, desperately.
Right now I'm thinking about making a rival pack, but, we all know that's a rather clichéd type of plot.
So, if you could, it would be awesome to just see if you can think up one!
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Even if it's just the beginnings of what might be a plot, you can post that and we'll see if we can maybe elaborate on it a bit.
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« Reply #1 on Apr 8, 2006, 1:14pm »
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Haha not to reply to my own topic, but I just got an idea.
What if we allow other animal groups to roleplay here. We could call them "clans."
Like, maybe we could allow a certain assortment of clans, for example: horses, lions, tigers, wolves and deer.
We could negotiate on that later.
How does this sound?
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« Reply #2 on Apr 10, 2006, 3:30pm »
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-speaks very softly so as not to offend ze mighty admin- I really don't like the idea of other animals...

I'll try to think up plots. ^^
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« Reply #3 on Apr 10, 2006, 4:06pm »
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lol, that's okay Aki. -bows in almightly adminess-
Yeah I was thinking about it and it might be a little bit difficult to just change because Castle of Shards is listed as a wolf roleplay in a bunch o' other places. =/
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« Reply #4 on Apr 11, 2006, 4:42am »
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lol... PLOT!!!

Er... well I did think some sorta illness, but maybe it's a bit too early for death and disastor in the ranks?

Perhaps... let's see... OOOOH! Maybe Surai (sorry to pick on your charrie but... well, she's an alphess with an attitude! XD) has some sort of reallly dark secret. Maybe she left the empire for a year or something and... I dunno... maybe there was a raid on the empire by a huge enemy pack that caused TONS of deaths and stuff like that and it had been Surai who had given away the empire's position and weakness and secrets and all that jazz.

Anywho, we can work on that.

As I was saying... some sort of interfering (not neccesarily evil, just nosey and easily startled... like Bree from Desperate Housewives if you watch that programme.) outsider comes along, recognises Surai (maybe he/she was part of the enemy pack... a healer? And was actually against the rebellion and thought Surai was an evil, treacherous biatch?) as the betrayer of the Empire; finds out she's the alpha; tells everyone (they'd HAVE to believe him/her, else it wouldn't work...); everyone is shocked and Surai is stripped of her alpha positions and banished. The outsider becomes alpha, but Aki (lol... I'm not trying to be a hero... it's just he has a puppy crush on her, after all. And someone needs to stay else it'll get boring... he's known her longest! [jokes]) stays with Surai, even though he's incredibley disapointed and upset with her. Then, Surai manages to explain that she DID tell the whereabouts of the Empire to the evil pack, but that was when she was 'young and foolish.' maybe she was on her own, couldn't hunt for herself because, at that time, she was a bit naive, and so she desperately needed food. The pack offered her food in exchange for information. She thought it over and maybe decided that the empire was strong enough to hold off an attack... or that the pack wouldn't find it anyway. Maybe the alpha was really kind and sweet to her and made it seem as if she doing nothing wrong, that he/she was just curious about such a lovely sounding place. Then, the pack ran off and ditched her to go to the empire, where the territory was so agreeable &c.

So Surai, by this point, has realised her mistake and sorta hardens. She gets back to the Empire very late and decides she'll do everything to help it considering what she's done to ail it. She works really, really hard and gains alpha position after a while. Which is where she is today! Yay!

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Ok... I've just powerplayed horribley... but I got a bit carried away. Feel free to correct, modify and critisize wherever you please, Surai.

...

Anyway, she tells Aki and then they manage to persuade some other pack member and then another and another 'till the whole pack believes her... but they do it quietly 'cause their new alpha has banned them from talking to her. Then, eventually, Surai returns and either fights the stupid alpha for her position back or he/she just gives it to her and runs off because the pack is so adamant that she return. And there you have it! A plot!

Now it needs perfecting, or dismissing if you guys don't like it. Whaddya say?
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« Reply #5 on Apr 11, 2006, 4:42am »
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Ooooooh... that post is loooooooong. XD
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« Reply #6 on Apr 11, 2006, 4:15pm »
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Oo... me like. Very spiffy. =]
I think fighting the alpha for the position seems like a lot more fun...
...and that's about it. Not much I can criticize in that.
I'd love to go with this plot, then!
What does everybody else think?
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« Reply #7 on Apr 12, 2006, 3:04pm »
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YAY! Should we do a poll? -feels important-

Jokes. I love plots.
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« Reply #8 on Apr 12, 2006, 3:06pm »
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Oh yeah, and the fighting is better, isn't it? More realistic and exciting...

Could I play the stupid alpha... maybe...

Should we do a poll on that too?

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« Reply #9 on Apr 23, 2006, 11:38am »
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Hmm... well, why not?
Since no one else seems to have a problem with this, let's go ahead and start giving out positions! =D
Aki, you can be the other, semi-evil steals-away-Surai's-position Alpha. I'll be umn... Surai. lol. Cleta, who would you like to be?
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« Reply #10 on May 10, 2006, 10:20pm »
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Umm, I don't mind, whoever you'd like me to be. Just give me something. I can some how crete something by just a paragraph about what I need to do...I did that to my character in Fiddler on the Roof :) so just give me someone and tell me what they need to do.
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« Reply #11 on May 11, 2006, 11:46am »
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Weeeell... you don't neccesarily need to bring in a new charrie (right, Surai...?). But Cleta or Cadmus could be the peep that Surai and Aki first persuade and they can help?
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